64. 25 February 2019
Evening. This is Miss Havisham. First, a little enlightenment. I am going to review your chapter one, book one as a soul might. Your characters are central to the story not the plot. The characters are equal in the sense they are 'living' in a fiction, much as you humans are living on a planet. We have three general life settings, a past, a present and a future.
2151 hours. Interesting. I thought the characters might be central but I did not consider the plot not to be so relevant. You can't have a good story without a plot. I don't know that this is fair that you consider the story from your perspective. I didn't write it for my soul I wrote it over my sense of human worth and dignity.
In here that includes your soul as well as heart and mind.- mh
2202 hours. Your chapter reviews then suggest how I could write not just focusing on the human heart and mind as much, but by focusing on a balanced piece that includes the soul in the greater dramatic theatre, like the works of Sophocles and Shakespeare do. If so, you are writing to produce far beyond my humble station.
You miss my point, Mr. Orndorff. I want to broaden your sense of what the soul considers important. It starts with one's character, herorhis real persona, the heartansoulanmind, the immortal-like stuffing of nothing material that you take with you when you leave this physical place. mh
2216 hours. I need to adjust to this. I mean, it is interesting-in-a-sort-of-way. I don't really pay much attention to my soul part. It is more abstract and not too interesting because the soul appears to have little to do with the everyday practicalities of life.
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